this is a pathetic attempt for a triolet. i should have created two different rhyme schemes but the rest is still stuck inside me. i’ll do better next time.
there are dragonflies across that hill
each of them finding a way to heal
if only i could teach them how to feel
there are dragonflies across that hill
the wind put them there against their will
they dont make a sound but their pains are real
there are dragonflies across that hill
each of them finding a way to heal
08.12.2005.1.51.p.m.
hi, nats.. nice, cozy place you got here :)..
hey guile =)